Wednesday, July 24, 2013

Copyediting Ohlen's Arrow

I have hired a copyeditor to go over the latest (and hopefully the last) revisions of Ohlen's Arrow. My goal is to have Ohlen's Arrow revised and edited and back on the Amazon.com and Barnes & Noble e-book store shelves by the end of August, and so far that timeline appears to be very realistic.

Stay tuned.

Thursday, July 18, 2013

Character Study: Mella

This is the next installment in a series where I introduce key characters from my new novel, Ohlen's Arrow. Rather than doing the predictable thing -- focusing on Ohlen, the main character -- I'm introducing the other key participants, his friends and enemies.

Mella and Ohlen grew up together in the village of Tarun. Whereas Ohlen was orphaned at a young age, Mella had a wonderful childhood growing up with her twin sister, Ranael, until tragedy struck. At the age of six, Ranael went missing without a trace.

Perhaps because of this, and in general because of the harsh nature of living in a remote village with all the dangers that presents, Mella grew into a strong-willed woman nearly fearless in her devotion to her husband, Scarn, and her two children, six-month old daughter Mirra and nineteen year old son Therran.

Mella has deep brown eyes and long, straight sandy blonde hair unlike most residents of Tarun that have dark brown or black hair. She stands 5' 6" tall and has a fit body. She has a ready smile and a joyous laugh, but can also take on a stern and no-nonsense demeanor when she or her family are threatened.

Most adults in Tarun learn to use at least one weapon because of the constant threat of attack from cru'gan, and Mella excelled at the use of a bow. She's not quite as accurate as Ohlen, but few people are.


Mella is intensely loyal to those she loves, and being a mother, is also capable of great tenderness and kindness.

Monday, July 15, 2013

Revisions are done, editor wanted!

I have completed the revisions to Ohlen's Arrow and am now looking to hire a professional line editor to go through it. I've got a couple of leads but am open to referrals from other authors. I'm specifically looking for someone that gets paid to edit as their day job, not just someone who writes good (yes, that's intentionally bad grammar).

It's my goal to have the final manuscript edited and ready for sale by the end of August.